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Post by Relairah on Feb 13, 2006 21:00:30 GMT -6
Note: This poem was written by Monkey. Thus (c) to Monkey. Just so everyone knows. He just wanted me to post this since he's really busy xD Enjoy ^^
I see your pictures
up on the wall.
Just like dusty fixtures
cluttering the hall.
All I can do
is stare at your face.
And wish for death
to quicken it's pace.
I think of the times
that we have shared.
Jingling like chimes
my vision impared.
Time for me
to bring this to an end.
Away to sea
my sorrows I send.
Just remember this
as you lie in your bed.
We never shared a kiss
except the one in my head.
~Monkey
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Post by Mama Z on Feb 17, 2006 14:37:23 GMT -6
o.0 Thats actually kind of..well creepy.. But its good in every sense of the word! ^^
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Post by Felypsa on Feb 18, 2006 13:47:12 GMT -6
That's awfully depressing and sad. Which means, of course, that it's good. (Gotta love the paradox of poetry, huh?)
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Post by lucian on Feb 19, 2006 17:01:58 GMT -6
That’s really good, the rhyme scheme is really well done. Great work to Monkey. ^^
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Post by Lil' Red Riding Loon on Mar 9, 2006 18:35:19 GMT -6
Its very fitting..
-nods-
Reminds me very much of a relationship I have with some one..
Keep up the good work Monkey
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Post by Aveilthé on Mar 9, 2006 18:37:02 GMT -6
Oh my gosh, that is one of the best poems I've read in a long time... the ending part of it is so sad... Good job, Monkey. Very commendable job.
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Post by Monkey Monk on Mar 9, 2006 18:59:05 GMT -6
*bows* Thankyou thankyou *rubs wrist on shirt arrogantly* Of course it's good, I wrote it 
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Post by selth9 on Apr 7, 2007 13:56:55 GMT -6
That's very, very, very (5 million verys later) Good.
I don't know what to say.
That means I'm speachless, which is good.
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