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Q & A
Jan 6, 2006 10:10:37 GMT -6
Post by Monkey Monk on Jan 6, 2006 10:10:37 GMT -6
What are we
when we die?
What are we
when we sleep?
What are we
when we lie?
What are we
in the deep?
We are what
life decreed.
We are but
simple beings.
We are what
we should be.
We are but
our very doing.
Why do we
hurt ourselfs?
Why do we
hurt each other?
Why do we
push away love?
Why do we
push away help?
Because we are
blind to pain.
Because we are
deaf to screams.
Because we are
cold of heart.
Because we are
hot of head.
Don't be we,
be you.
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Q & A
Jan 7, 2006 16:18:08 GMT -6
Post by Mama Z on Jan 7, 2006 16:18:08 GMT -6
Deep..dark..loved it..save for you spelt 'ourselves' wrong in there.
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Q & A
Jan 8, 2006 1:44:48 GMT -6
Post by Relairah on Jan 8, 2006 1:44:48 GMT -6
Wow, good job Monkey ^_^ I like that poem, the way it was written and all, and my favorite part is when it says, Don't be we, be you =) You ish good at writing poetry x3
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Q & A
Jan 9, 2006 10:06:39 GMT -6
Post by Monkey Monk on Jan 9, 2006 10:06:39 GMT -6
Ooops I knew I'd make atleast one typo. Thanks for the comments though. ^^ |
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Q & A
Apr 7, 2007 14:08:38 GMT -6
Post by selth9 on Apr 7, 2007 14:08:38 GMT -6
Monkey, you are such a good poet!!
All of your poems show that!
Good Job man!
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