Kazzies Poetry

[lupus]

Yes.. I write poetry, quite badly by a few accounts. But I'll share anyways. Starting with the most recent, which is actually more of a set of lyrics than anything, yet is not music poetrys sister in the arts?

.Hide.awaY.

Don the mask
Everyones happy
Everythings fine
So long as you joke

And laugh
And play
And keep a smile

Just sing there song
And you can avoid
The gapeing wounds
For a little while

Hide away
Hide away
Hide away wolf

Keep your tail
Between your legs

Keep your head
Hung low

The moonlit night
Is silent now
Without your mourning
Soulful
Cry

Everyones just
Seeking out safety
Content to bemoan
A system they hold

Ever terrified
Of change
Talk is there facade

Intellegence faked
Morals ever unkept
Like cheap *explicativedelted*
In the big city.

Hide away
Hide away
Hide away wolf

Keep your tail
Between your legs

Keep your head
Hung low

The moonlit night
Is silent now
Without your mourning
Soulful
Cry

But at least
Your finally
Getting by

From day to pestilant day

As long as you
Hide away.

~Cassandra 'Haymer' Wippert
21/12/05

I'm not a very frequant writer, or very good, but I'll post what I can when I can in this thread, if thats ok with everyone anyways.. Did I mention I'm rather bad at this? *chuckles softly*

Edit : Slight editation as I am not sure of the.. Sensabilities of the forum as a whole at this time.

:..2-2-7..:

[Warlock]

expletive deleted? that would be an awesome title for something. expletive deleted.

anyway... i love that first line. 'don the mask.' i like the repitition in the fourth stanza, and the way the seventh stanza is set up. and pestilent... that's a good word. love that word.

there are a few grammatical/spelling errors though. in the first stanza, 'everyones and everythings' should be 'everyone's and everything's.' in the first line of the third stanza, 'there' should be 'their,' and in the third line, 'gapeing' should be 'gaping'

i really think it's good, though. i love poetry ever so much.

[Mama Z]

Out of curiousity..iis your nickname prouncouned Cassie?

Great poem, loved the words you used and everything to make the picture.

[Monkey Monk]

Very good. I like your works so far. It does need to be edited and it needs a bit more flow, but other than that it is a good piece. Keep practicing for it will make even the best better.