Post by aeolos on Dec 26, 2009 17:44:19 GMT -6
While I was on the site called Wajas, I decided that I would accept a free poem request from someone . This was the ending result:
Oh, and I will use this thread to post some of my other poems later on, too.
I would love to receive comments, suggestions, or any other type of feedback! It would be greatly appreciated, and I thank you in advance.
[glow=red,2,300]Cloverfield[/glow]
The loud, cold screams in the devil’s ear,
Easily heard, only offered his sneers
All soon to be commandeered
By Hell’s nasty frontier.
Cities burn, buildings crash
Blood runs cold and enemies clash.
The strong and the brave
Can’t save the day
All hope is lost,
So far away.
When the end is near,
Everything will fall,
Including man, for there’s
No exceptions… it consumes ALL.
The loud, cold screams in the devil’s ear,
Easily heard, only offered his sneers
All soon to be commandeered
By Hell’s nasty frontier.
Cities burn, buildings crash
Blood runs cold and enemies clash.
The strong and the brave
Can’t save the day
All hope is lost,
So far away.
When the end is near,
Everything will fall,
Including man, for there’s
No exceptions… it consumes ALL.
Oh, and I will use this thread to post some of my other poems later on, too.
I would love to receive comments, suggestions, or any other type of feedback! It would be greatly appreciated, and I thank you in advance.