Kamui-Human

[snow]

Name:Kamui

Gender:Male

Race:Human

Sub-Race:Werewolf

Breed:N/A

Appearance:In his base form, human, Kamui has shaggy silver hair, about four to five inches long, that at times covers his neon purple eyes. His pupils are slits, he is seventeen, and stands at five feet six inches. He is lean and has more muscles then Subaru. He wears loose fitting black silk pants and a handmade black bear fur coat, bear skin facing out, with buttons made from silver and a hood. Also, lining the hood and bottom of jacket is thick white rabbit. He has no shirt and the coat is rarely buttoned up. Even though he is not in his wolf or werewolf form, he always has is silver furred tail and ears atop his head, as well as his razor sharp canines. He can change his human finger nails to were they are his werewolf claws when ever. Kamui has a sword named Ginryu. He keeps it within his left hand and calls upon it with a spell. In his Raitei or wolf form, his fur is thick and silver, his eyes a brighter neon purple and pupils slits. His teeth and claws are sharp as razors, stands at four feet. In his Hama or werewolf form, he stands at six feet two inches, walks on two feet. He has thick silver fur all over except his chest and face, the fur is short, thin, and soft. His ears are pointed, his teeth and claws razor sharp. His neon purple eyes, pupils slits, glow at night.

Personality:Kamui is outgoing and loves to joke around with his twin brother Subaru. He can be mean at times, but does have a heart. He often worries about his brother and fairly protective of him because of the death mark. He is loyal and honest to his brother and who ever his brother trusts.

Magic:Kamui knows healing and fire magic.
-Spells:Ryu-o-Jin(Magic Wave Dragon)- When Kamui uses this spell, only use able with Ginryu, a wave of flames shaped as dragons stream from the sword and upon the enemy. The spell can cause minor to severe burns. (If the enemy know water/ice magic or is soaked the burns are less severe.)

Guardian Blood- Kamui's blood, as well as his twin brothers, has healing properties. It can heal from a simple scratch to a large gash and everything in between.Broken bones, burns, etc.) Though the more severe the wound the more blood needed to heal the wound. The only way the healing properties of the blood works is if it is offered and drunken, it can't be taken.
Dragons Breath- This spell allows Subaru to breath fire like a dragon.

Ginryu-Kamui calls upon his sword, Ginryu, with this spell. Ginryu is a sword of fire and the hilt is a golden dragon.

Skills:Kamui is not as agile and fast as his twin brother but he makes up for it with his strength. Thanks to his werewolf genes, he has far more strength then an average human. He is a good fighter, though his twin is far better, and hunter.

Biography: Kamui and his twin brother, Subaru, were guardians of their master demons, magical beings who get their power from the netherworld. (Guardians are werewolves created by the demons to guard them from assassins, the seekers,, thus giving them the name guardian. Only the senior werewolves are called guardians, ((On their sixteenth birthday they are deemed guardians and trustworthy.)) while young werewolves are called runts or mutts.) When they were fifteen, they found out the truth about the demons and who the seekers, magical beings who get their powers from the earth, actually are. Subaru and Kamui allied with the seekers and planned a rebel. They told their pack, The Haldis pack, and waited until they were deemed guardians. They had the perfect rebel plan, but, three of their own betrayed them. They had told the head demon of their plans. On the night of the rebel, the demons and remaining guardians were lying in wait to attack. All in the rebel was killed except Subaru, Kamui and their parents. The head demon offered them a deal, the both of them could live and be alphas of their own packs as long as they kill their parents now. They both declined the deal, the head demon killed their father and dragged their mother in front of them and afford the deal one last time. They declined once more and begged him not to kill her, he said no and killed her right before their eyes. Her blood splattered on their faces, they both wailed out in horror. The head demon said that as punishment, one of them shall bear the mark of death. Kamui had wailed when he grabbed Subaru by his left hand. With Subaru's left hand grasped in his right hand, the head demon made a Black Rose with the other. Spreading Subaru's fingers so his palm was showing the rose's black stem broke out into five razor sharp thorny vines. The head demon placed the bud of the rose upon Subaru's palm, the vines wrapped around his arm up to his elbow, the thorns digging into his skin. When the demon released him he said that when ever you are angered or stressed the vines shall spread and when they cover your entire body you shall die, that is your punishment. A year later the vines had made their way to Subaru's shoulder. Kamui and his brother travel the world looking for a way to remove the mark.

[demin]

You're gonna have to walk me through what Guardians are. From what I can see, they're just magic werewolves. Which can already exist without making an entirely new species. What exactly makes them so unique that they have to be set apart as an entirely separate species? Also, there's a lot of spelling errors. I suggest you get the spell check add on for Internet Explorer, or use another browser like Firefox or Chrome which have it built in.

[snow]

Ok, misspelled words corrected and Guardians are werewolves created by the demons. Unlike regular werewolves they have three different forms, human, raitei, and hama. They can control when they shift and what form they shift into as well as control themselves. The demons altered their blood to have healing properties so they could heal each other in battle.

[demin]

I'm still not seeing what makes them sufficiently different from werewolves commonly played on this site. =/ My werewolf character has a human, werewolf, and feral form, as well as enhanced healing properties. He also has control over himself in every form.

[snow]

They have their ears, tail and werewolf canines in human form as well as able to sharpen their human nails to were they are sharp like their werewolf forms. Ancestors were created from either fire, water/ice, air, darkness, light, or earth. Their ancestor's element of creation destines their elemental magic.

[demin]

Once again, being able to keep the more canine features while in human form is pretty common for werewolves here. My werewolf keeps his fangs and his claws at times. =/ I still don't think it's sufficient to have them made into an entirely separate species, but I'm going to leave that decision up to Wom. I'll toss her a PM and get back to you.

[Wyndbain]

"Guardian" is not a breed, as humans do not have breeds. Since werewolves to begin with are not real wolves, they simply don't have a breed. In a this case, the breed section would be N/A. From what I've read and what Demin's already said, they have all the aspects of your general, run-of-the-mill, mythological werewolf. There are no aspects that give them traits unique to their species, basically. Magical abilities, skill and powers don't make a new breed.

And the name "Guardians" doesn't make enough sense to begin with, even if it's not the name of the "breed". If the demons that created them are as cruel as you depict them in their history, why would they call them guardians? They aren't so noble as to give them such an honor, I don't think. Who on earth would call them guardians? The Druins have pretty much the exact same back story, in that they were creatures created by demons to act as soldiers in times of war, but they were never called soldiers or any type of honorable title. No. To demons they were just known as druins; fighters and even slaves or scum that were too stupid to go against them, while other animals only saw them as vicious beasts and even called them demons themselves.

If you want to tie the name "Guardian" to your characters though, try to think of a suitable back story as to how such a name came about. As it is now, the name's just been thrown in there for the purpose of making these demonic werewolves stand out and accomplishes the opposite effect. It isn't symbolic to them, it isn't meaningful or thought out, it's just there. Like a good throw rug. Yeah, it looks pretty, but everyone just ends up stepping on it in the end.

[snow]

Guardians are werewolves created by the demons to guard them from assassins, the seekers,, thus giving them the name guardian. Only the senior werewolves are called guardians, (On their sixteenth birthday they are deemed guardians and trustworthy.)while young werewolves are called runts or mutts.
Would this be ok?

[demin]

I just don't understand why you want them to be an entirely separate breed. For all intents and purposes, they're just normal, Hollywood werewolves. If you want them to guard demons, fine, but it's more appropriate for an individual backstory rather than the origin of an entire race, which is so similar to one that already exists it'd be redundant to allow them. =/ And why would demons so powerful as to be able to create life need to be guarded from anything?

[snow]

I'm not going for the breed anymore, Wom said no so i put N/A on breed. That was the back story, and the seekers are demons but get their power from the earth itself. The demons made a deal with the netherworld while the seekers stuck with the earth, they are the same beings but one group preferred the nether world's