Aquila- Eagle

[aquamarine]

Name: Aquila

Gender: female

Race:Eagle

Sub-Race: N/A.

Breed: (I actually looked this up!)Black Hawk Eagle

Appearance:Aquila has black feathers and (unlike the original black hawk)silvery vine designs. These start at her head then run along her back and wings then end on her tail. Aquila’s whole underside is covered with thin, horizontal black and white stripes. On the top of her head she has two feathers that stick upward. She has strong talons and feet and a powerful beak.

Personality: Aquila is calm, curious, brave, and sometimes cocky. She is young but mature and even though she not that bright she tries to think before she does anything. Also, Aquila can be proud at sometimes and tries hard at everything she does.

Magic: Aquila can control wind. she didn't receive her power genetically but by a spirit. She acquired it during her abduction by humans.

-Spells(strongest to weakest):

-Wind control: this is mainly her go to spell. She can control wind with this spell just by flapping her wings or moving her body.
-wind tunnel: Aquila uses this spell by rapidly flapping her wings at her opponent
-Solar heal: this allows her to heal anyone except herself. She uses it by generating heat from the sun on to her wings then flapping them towards her allies or selected creature’s wound or injury.

Skills: Aquila is a great hunter of the sky and has great eye sight that can see even on the darkest nights no matter what the surroundings are. She’s a fit and quick flyer. Her body is made for speed and distance for when she’s flying.

Biography: Aquila grew up in a tree hallow with 2 other hatchlings and her parents. She was the smallest of the other hatchlings but was the strongest and the first one to fly. But, shortly after learning she was taken by humans away from her family. Humans trained her to hunt and grow stronger as a flyer. While in human hands she gained a power by a spirit. using her power to escape she traveled to find a place for a decent home.

[demin]

I take issue with a few things. First, a few of her powers seem a bit unreasonable, especially since I don't know how she came to acquire them. Was she born with them (which is a cop out answer I won't accept)? Did she bond with a spirit of wind (in which case her powers would be rather weak until the spirit grew stronger)? Since she's an eagle, I doubt she'd spend much time on the ground except when sleeping or eating. In a combat situation, her first instinct would likely be "stay in the air as much as possible," which means her powers would become exponentially more powerful until she was knocked to the ground, which most other characters would be unable to do. I suggest removing that entire line.

Controlling weather is a bit different than other powers. Weather is purely up to nature, which cannot be controlled no matter how hard you try. Characters with weather magic may influence the weather, not control it, and weather is so fickle and subject to change nothing may even happen. They won't be able to make a typhoon on demand, or shoot lightning from their mouths.

Also, shooting lightning would be a power given by a spirit of electricity, not weather.

Also, solar wind isn't just hot wind. Solar wind is when charged electrons and protons escape the sun's orbit. If powerful enough they can get through a planet's atmosphere and bathe it in radiation. Which is bad. Very bad. As in, "every living thing in a certain area would die horribly" bad. "Destroy the ecosystem" bad.

[aquamarine]

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