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Wolves
Jul 3, 2005 19:47:20 GMT -6
Post by erynia on Jul 3, 2005 19:47:20 GMT -6
I thought I'd give it a go! Never done this before... ._. Oh well. Feel free to make fun. It's gonna suck. >< xD
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Blue skies give way As the darkness falls Footfall and panting Echo 'cross the timberland hall Blending to shadows A whisper of fear Running as one Loving bodies drawn near The snow starts to fall Fluttering forth to the ground The storm is coming A new joy is found Whirlwinds of crystals Frigid gems of the night Soft to the touch Spiraling endlessly in flight Dancing and playing Humor thick in the air Then turning to hunt For that's why they're there Sinew'd limbs crashing forth Plowing on into the night Tongues lolling outward Anticipating the fight Survival is key But love is there, too Two seperate, now one Begin life anew Rushing forth through in splendour Their prey now in sight The beast knows it will end Soon surrenders to their might The crushing wind howls But the night is so long Whelps back home prique their auds Straining to hear the distant song Dials back in glory Victory cries echo west Flying forth to the seas Remote lands to its rest...
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Wolves
Jul 3, 2005 19:51:31 GMT -6
Post by Relairah on Jul 3, 2005 19:51:31 GMT -6
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice job ;D
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Wolves
Jul 3, 2005 20:00:52 GMT -6
Post by erynia on Jul 3, 2005 20:00:52 GMT -6
Thanka! xD I don't think I did so well, though... oO
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Wolves
Jul 3, 2005 20:43:05 GMT -6
Post by Aveilthé on Jul 3, 2005 20:43:05 GMT -6
Wow! It was well-written! =3
"Survival is key", that is true. e__e
=Challenges Hikaru to a fight to the death.= D:<
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Wolves
Jul 3, 2005 20:45:23 GMT -6
Post by Relairah on Jul 3, 2005 20:45:23 GMT -6
No, really, YA DID GREAT!!!! SERIOUSLY, I Like that poem, it's awesome!!!!!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
Arg *accepts the challenge* DX
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Wolves
Jul 3, 2005 20:47:14 GMT -6
Post by erynia on Jul 3, 2005 20:47:14 GMT -6
=gets camcorder to watch this battle of the... well, the battle.=
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Wolves
Jul 3, 2005 20:48:17 GMT -6
Post by erynia on Jul 3, 2005 20:48:17 GMT -6
I'm glad you guys liked it. I thought it would be crap seeing as I kinda just... well, pulled it out of my ass. :/ Hey, I made a joke! xD
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Wolves
Jul 3, 2005 21:07:32 GMT -6
Post by Relairah on Jul 3, 2005 21:07:32 GMT -6
Yeah, well for just pulling it right out, that's really good. I wonder how much more AWESOME something would be if you put time and effort to it *shrug* Oh well, that's still really good! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Wolves
Jul 4, 2005 13:27:55 GMT -6
Post by Warlock on Jul 4, 2005 13:27:55 GMT -6
Oo You think this sucks?! Well, I think my art sucks, so... *shrugs* The artist is her own worst critic. Anyway, it's very well written. I wish I were more literate. -_- *sigh* Practice makes perfect, though.
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Wolves
Jul 4, 2005 14:19:55 GMT -6
Post by erynia on Jul 4, 2005 14:19:55 GMT -6
You speak the truth, there, Rodent person. The artist is the critic.
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Wolves
Jul 5, 2005 10:59:36 GMT -6
Post by Itena on Jul 5, 2005 10:59:36 GMT -6
WOAH!!!! LUVVY!!!
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