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Post by moonwolf on Apr 4, 2007 15:24:19 GMT -6
" Daddy why did you hit me?It was not my fault mommy died."Billy asked his father.He felt the sting that his dad gave him.He saw his father lay by his mother dead body.He dung a hole for her and put her in the hole.He put a flower on top then came in the den.He fell asleep and so did billy.Was this going to be a good night?They both fell asleep. (comments )
(i think it's bad,but what do you think?)
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