Alone and Sad

[kuroi]

"Sure!"
Black stood up, showing that she's 1.72.
((Frikken' tall lol)).

[spiritwolf]

"ok!" "follow me" Emerald went to the cave entrance and stepped inside. The inside was lit with blue, magical lanterns, giving the room a soft look. The floor was ice. But the ice was not cold.It was actually warm. Her bed was fluffy snow. THe snow, too, was not cold. Emerald had cast these enchantmensts herself. "like it?"
(lol)

[kuroi]

"Yeah"
Black looked around.

((so very short))

[spiritwolf]

((so very short?))
"thanks. You might find i t a bit cold to look at....but it isn't cold to feel!

[kuroi]

Black sat on the ice ((and nearly slipped >>)),
And turns wolf form again.

[spiritwolf]

Emerald lay down. She looked at the dome shape of her ceiling. The room was aactually very big-big enough so she can fly in it.

[kuroi]

((ughh I dunno what to write))

Black looked at the roof too.

Seconds later, she nearly fell asleep, it being such a long day.

[Aveilthé]

OOC: I'm here to inform you that you both need to work on your literacy in roleplay. This website is for intermediate to advanced roleplayers only, so brush up on your skills. You two roleplay okay for starters, if you two are newbies at it at all.

To help you, add more detail in your posts. Talk about the atmosphere around your wolf characters, give more detail on their color, how thick their coats are, etc. And give your wolves more personality, too, and it is not to offend you. Give them more depth and uniqueness, it is a turn-off to see wolves that are Mary-Sues (meaning wolves that appear to be all-beautiful, all-perfect, etc).

The only reason I am stopping you as of now is because your roleplaying does not meet our requirements as a site. When you have joined I am sure that you have agreed to our rules. Failure to comply will result in locking of this thread. I appologize sincerely for any inconvenience.

[spiritwolf]

Noticing her tiredness, Emerald said "here you can sleep on this" As she said this, her gold halo symbol on her forhead glowed and a ple of fluffy and warm snow appeared on the ground across te room. "don't worry, it isn't cold. It is actually very comfortable" ((i know me neither.)) ((oh sorry. I will work on my roleplaying skills))

[Aveilthé]

OOC: Also would like to add that your posts are very short, I see that they're at least a sentence long. Rules require you to make at least a paragraph. Believe me, it is possible. A paragraph usually consist of four to five sentences. Those posts can be considered spam because they are so short in a roleplay.

Edit: How can snow be warm? That is an unbelievable feat. At least give an explanation or a backstory as to why the snow she produces is warm and whatnot, your readers would like to know why I am sure.

[kuroi]

"Thanks."

Black walked over to the pile of snow across Emeralds den and lay down. She quickly fell asleep, snoring pretty loudly, continuosly rolling back and forth in her sleep.

Dreaming of Something.

((Oh kay. I'll work on my roleplay))

[spiritwolf]

Emerald walked over to her snow pile. She yawned and was feeling a bit tired. Being pregnant does things to her power. She needed to rest. All of a sudden she gave a loud moan. She fell to the floor. Her movements, usually very graceful, were now jerky. Her silver wings were stretched out bedide her. I think i am giving birth, she thought. Her breaths were ragged and long.

[kuroi]

Black suddenly sat up, startled by Emeralds loud moan.
She quickly stood up.
"Is something wrong?"
Black was very drowsy.

((It'll take me a while to post the next, i'm busy. just 15 mins or so. keep posting))

[spiritwolf]

"I-gasp-think-gasp-i am-gasp-giving birth!" She said with much effort. Her wings flapped making the whole room windy, like a tornado. She moaned. All of a sudden a little wp;f pub was born. Emerald started licking the pup rapidly, on instinct. She knew that she still had more pups.

[spiritwolf]

(((ok)))
Emerald started giving birth to another pup. This one was tan too. She started licked that one too. Emerald's breath was still ragged and in long gasps. Her wings thrashed about wildly. She got a cut on her chest and it was bleeding, turning her thick, silver fur bright crimson. One pup was not breathing very well and she licked it fiercly, trying to get the blood circulating. She groaned and a little head silver appeared. She came out and Emerald began licking them all. Emerald calmed down and her wings stopped thrashing around. He breathing gradually returned to normal. She cleaned the pups and nursed them. Only one of them didn't make it.