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Post by moonwolf on Mar 17, 2007 19:52:30 GMT -6
Moon was walking .She had black fur and her mate nightfang had light brown fur.She was see if her pack was alright.
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Post by Aveilthé on Mar 17, 2007 19:55:28 GMT -6
OOC: "Her pack"... I'm just wondering what you mean by that. Your character can't have her own pack since there's already an alpha male and female of Shinkou Ookami. If you want your own pack, you have to ask permission from Wom - but she is not really starting this whole "multiple pack" business since she hasn't finished anything yet, at least that's what I know.
Edit: Please have a paragraph of at least 5 or more sentences. ^-^ It is more attractive to see a post that an individual has worked on. This includes a more descriptive paragraph, and conducting yourself well in vocabulary. Don't be afraid to use a dictionary if you forget a word, or... yeah. =D Tell us more about what your character feels, thinks, what is surrounding her, what she looks like, etc.
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Post by Felypsa on Mar 17, 2007 19:55:43 GMT -6
oOc| you might want to try being a -little- more descriptive...where were they walking? what were they saying, if anything? what did they see? have a little more action and description going on, it'll make it a lot more interesting and more people will want to join in 
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