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Post by yrpash on Mar 31, 2007 13:25:33 GMT -6
Axel was wandering through lands he had no knowledge of. the reason, he was seeking one of the last summoners, he had to ask her for council she had been last reported in this area. he was drifting, no place in particular he was just feeling out this area when a monstrous screech of a battle cry erupted above him, well he knew because he had heard enough. he changed his route and headed in the crys direction.
a couple of minutes later he stumbled upon: a half angle and demon tearing each other to shreds while plumminting to wards the earth in flames. also he spied he spied a creature who's original appearance seemed to be wolven but was currently in flames, and a small silver angelic wolf passed out on the ground.
after he had seen all he Begin to cast. as he rose his delicate hands his one and only eye rolled back into his head, he blinked and his eye was ebony black, the first stage of corruption. he attempted to freeze the two fighters and draw them apart slightly, if he succeded he would heal any life threating wounds, and only those wounds well he dint want to use up more power than was necessary did he? he gently placed them on the ground and spoke:
"cease combat NOW do not engage again, until i am satisfied, otherwise you will force me to cat again. tell me what is the reason for your fighting?"
Axel stopped all casting and released them.
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Post by Aveilthé on Mar 31, 2007 13:53:35 GMT -6
OOC:
To yrpash:
This is pure powerplay: "he froze the two fighters and drew them apart slightly,"
Do not powerplay. If you continue, your posts will be deleted and you will be warned. Read the rules carefully. Failure to ignore this post, and the rules will result in a warning. Please change your post.
Everything that your character does should be in an attempt form. What you did was not an attempt, but forced.
A good example to avoid powerplay is doing something like this:
"He tried to freeze the two fighters. If he was successful in doing so, he would attempt to draw them apart slightly so that they would avoid harming one another any more."
Also, watch for spelling error and grammar mistakes. I see this happening a lot in your post, and those could be easily unavoidable as well.
Thank you for reading.
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Post by bjorn on Apr 1, 2007 9:29:17 GMT -6
Merdoc couldn't believe her luck. she should be dead now the monster had plunged his sword into her chest, but still she lived. a humanoid white robed figure had saved her, he had power and she needed to get him on her side. he would come. he was one of the corrupted too she sensed. her nicer personality cane through. "thank you thank you," she squealed " i was just hunting minding my own business when this thing attacked me because of my dark plumage. you should kill him now i haven't done anything except defend myself." after merdoc had finished she gave a sly glare directed towards kanaye.
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Post by demin on Apr 1, 2007 9:50:27 GMT -6
Kanaye looked around in surprise, his wounds were healed, his wing was repaired, and he had his power back. His happiness did not last long, as he saw Merdoc healed as well. He turned his attention towards the new comer. "What have you done? This thing beside me is a powerful demon. I attacked her because she wanted to kill the wolf pup, just because she is an angelic wolf." He saw Merdoc give him that look, it took all of his will power to keep from attacking her on the spot. If he attacked her now, this new comer might take her side and Kanaye would be sure to lose that fight.
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Post by yrpash on Apr 1, 2007 10:22:11 GMT -6
as merdoc spoke he glared at the angle, he did not speak hearing them both out. he though for a brief moment, and decided to side with no one and let them go if they left each other alone and go there separate ways. in doing this axle's eye rolled back and let them go.
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Post by demin on Apr 1, 2007 10:23:40 GMT -6
((Wow...that's anti climactic XDDD))
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Post by bjorn on Apr 1, 2007 11:03:32 GMT -6
merdoc saw the rage in kanayes eye, she better not push it, she decided to take her leave. she ran full pelt and jumpt into the air rasing altiude and dissappered behind a cloud. yes she fled but she was free to fight another day. she let out a vicoriuos sqauk she had survived the angels onslaught now she was free to ambush him when she was strong enogh. kanaye would see merdoc again.
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Post by demin on Apr 1, 2007 11:18:46 GMT -6
Kanaye just watched as Merdoc flew off into the clouds, he didn't care anymore. He was mentally and physically tired. He walked over to the small angelic wolf and picked her up, and cradled her in his arms. He then walked over to Farrell and softly kicked him. "Farrell, wake up. Merdoc is gone." He sat on the ground and waited for both of the wolves to wake. ((I'm just guessing, but I think yrpash has left the thread XDD So I think it is your turn to post bjorn.....and tell babiekatie to get back in here  )) |
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Post by bjorn on Apr 1, 2007 11:25:39 GMT -6
ooc: no he pmed me and hes still doing it
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Post by yrpash on Apr 1, 2007 11:27:37 GMT -6
axle looks into the sky as she vanishes and then turns his head and approached the smoldering wolf on the floor to see if it is ok. then axle says "why did she fly of so soon, i though she would stick around a bit longer for you both to sort it out."
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Post by bjorn on Apr 1, 2007 11:38:26 GMT -6
farrell felt himself retaking control of his body, shortly after he felt a dull tap in his side from a boot. he stopped all flames and returned to normal wolf state. he herd an unfamiliar voice, and lifted his head. he saw the stranger standing over him keeping his eyes fixed on the stranger, he rose and walked over to kanaye hackles raised defencivly, too many times he had been caught unaware today and now it was happening again. he stopped growling looked up at kanaye and licked the pup on the nose. as he met kanayes eyes he broke away quicky and stared at the stranger. "identfy yourself" he barked at the robed man.
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Post by yrpash on Apr 1, 2007 11:47:17 GMT -6
looking at the wolf axle says "hello there I'm axle, and you are?"with a puzzled look on his face. looking up to kanaye and back down to the wolf. axle walked over to the wolf with his hand out so he can sniff it.
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Post by babiekatie on Apr 1, 2007 11:53:30 GMT -6
Little Opal started to open her eyes slightly and tried to lift her head she realized that she was in Kanaye's arms she tried to snuggle up to him,
"whats going on?"she said"whats happened"
She looked round and saw Farrell was stood right next to her and there was a newcomer
"who are you?"she said.
As she said this she jumped out of Kanaye's arms and stepped next to Farrell and looked up at the newcomer and waited for a reply.
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Post by demin on Apr 1, 2007 12:55:11 GMT -6
Kanaye stood up and looked at Axle. "That demon can't be reasoned with, she took control of Farrell, made the pup faint, and tore up my right wing before you came along." He sat back down and put his hand on Opal and began to stroke her. "Pup, you fainted because of a powerful demon came and attacked us. It wasn't Farrell who said that he was going to take you back to the demons. Merdoc took control of him and made him say that. The real Farrell wouldn't hurt you." He looked up at Axle and gave him an angry look. "And I would have killed Merdoc if you hadn't interfered." The look of anger disappeared in almost and instant. "I'm sorry, stranger. I'm just tired, and you didn't know the circumstances of the fight. Forgive me."
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Post by bjorn on Apr 11, 2007 14:45:46 GMT -6
Farrell watched the stranger curiously, but quickly returned his look to kanaye. "You are strong. you would have slaughtered that beast. its a shame the priest with a soft heart interrupted." Farrell shook his coat and lose hair flew everywhere. Farrell looked at kanaye more business like. " let me come with you after this please, teach me, make me stronger than i am. you are a wanderer and so am i now let me help slaughter those which tormented and banished me. you are light with a pure soul and i am dark with a tarnished one, we could help each other i know how they work." Farrell was looking directly at kanayes eyes looking for a response. or a glimmer into what kanaye was thinking.
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