Poem The lonesome wolf.

[TheRuddyRaku!]

I tread cautiously, My paws askew,
As my brow furrows in though thinking of you.
The scents, the smells, The personal hell's,
that without a mate, i have to get through.

I tread once more, with a crunch of snow,
My destination, who knows?
And thus my paw, Hits the floor,
I sniff for her, though she is no more.

Who am i to know, where she will go,
The winds whistle, as the snow blows.
a disenchanted tear suddenly flows,
Running down my wolfish nose.

I know not of my destination, or that of my place,
A lonesome canine, fallen from grace,
Once more a tear flows across my cheek,
And sliding down my beaten face, As opportunity is meek.

My vision, hazy,
My sights, Blurred,
for a wolf to mourn? It seems obscurd.
Yet here i am, seen and heard,
as inside, my furry heart burns.


Reviews please?

[ame]

Comments...?

*takes a deep breathe* This... is... Utterly amazing! You're a much better poet than me... I really enjoy this. It's rather touching, and even with a couple minor oopses (Which might not be oopses at all), I am just in awe of your prowess.

Don't ever stop. ;3

[kata]

Most poems that rhyme are sort of cheesy, but this one rhymes and isn't cheesy at all! It's really good!